Post by Valderra Smithson on Dec 18, 2006 17:28:25 GMT -5
Name: Valderra Smithson
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: Valderra is a very average woman. Her hair is blonde and runs down her back, to about waist length, and she has bangs, that sweep into her eyes. Valderra's eyes are emerald, and they are always full of life, and have lots of emotion in them. She carries herself with pride. Her attire is an emerald corset atop a white tunic, and brown pants, tucked into black boots. Her belt, holds a sheath, which contains a sword. The sword is silver, with an emerald jewel in the hilt. She has a thin body, but is stronger than you'd think. Her height is about 5' 4'', and her skin is a tannish color, from working with her sword skills in the sun. She is always smiling, and carries about her, an air of happiness. Her smile brings smiles to other faces. Her eyes shine with the intensity of one thousand suns, and the passion of one hundred moons.
RP Example:
Valderra smiled, and grabbed her sword. Surrounded by five Urgals, she began to attack, a pleasant smile on her face the whole time. They cried out in anger and pain as she ripped through them. One of them snuck up behind her and began to attack, only he was stopped short when he was scorched by the fiery breath of her dragon, Gabriel.
Gabriel snorted and then stamped a mighty leg on the ground. He grabbed Valderra and put her onto his back, where she began to fight the Urgals from there. It wasn't long before they had won.
Valddera put her bloodied sword on her lap, and got out a rag. Running the blade along the rag, she cleaned it until it gleamed.
Your fighting has really come along Valderra, said Gabriel, looking back at her. Sheathing the sword, Valderra looked at him. Patting his neck softly, she said,"Thank you." He jumped into the air, and they flew off into the sky.
Thanks for getting that one Urgal behind me.
Don't worry, I had it covered. I'm here to protect you. They dove towards some ruins. Valderra slid off his back, and stepped into them. Looking around, she said,"My village. My home. It's...gone." For once, her face held no smile. Gabriel let out a bellow of distraught. He wrapped a comforting wing around Valderra.
Rank: Hero
Country: Alageasia
Personality: Valderra loves to sing and dance, and practices both whenever she's not doing Dragon Rider duties. She enjoys entertaining people, and sketching. Valderra has always been one to smile, and is contagious for it. She likes to fly with Gabriel. She's a very easy person to get along with, and has hardly any enemies, that is of course, with the exception of Galbatorix. Working for the Varden makes her very happy, and she lets it be known. She enjoys sleeping in whenever possible, and even doesn't mind getting up early. She doesn't like those who lie and cheat, and has an uncanny ability to tell who those people are. She enjoys helping those who are in need, and doesn't ask to get anything back, other than a smile.
Code word: Zar'roc
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: Valderra is a very average woman. Her hair is blonde and runs down her back, to about waist length, and she has bangs, that sweep into her eyes. Valderra's eyes are emerald, and they are always full of life, and have lots of emotion in them. She carries herself with pride. Her attire is an emerald corset atop a white tunic, and brown pants, tucked into black boots. Her belt, holds a sheath, which contains a sword. The sword is silver, with an emerald jewel in the hilt. She has a thin body, but is stronger than you'd think. Her height is about 5' 4'', and her skin is a tannish color, from working with her sword skills in the sun. She is always smiling, and carries about her, an air of happiness. Her smile brings smiles to other faces. Her eyes shine with the intensity of one thousand suns, and the passion of one hundred moons.
RP Example:
Valderra smiled, and grabbed her sword. Surrounded by five Urgals, she began to attack, a pleasant smile on her face the whole time. They cried out in anger and pain as she ripped through them. One of them snuck up behind her and began to attack, only he was stopped short when he was scorched by the fiery breath of her dragon, Gabriel.
Gabriel snorted and then stamped a mighty leg on the ground. He grabbed Valderra and put her onto his back, where she began to fight the Urgals from there. It wasn't long before they had won.
Valddera put her bloodied sword on her lap, and got out a rag. Running the blade along the rag, she cleaned it until it gleamed.
Your fighting has really come along Valderra, said Gabriel, looking back at her. Sheathing the sword, Valderra looked at him. Patting his neck softly, she said,"Thank you." He jumped into the air, and they flew off into the sky.
Thanks for getting that one Urgal behind me.
Don't worry, I had it covered. I'm here to protect you. They dove towards some ruins. Valderra slid off his back, and stepped into them. Looking around, she said,"My village. My home. It's...gone." For once, her face held no smile. Gabriel let out a bellow of distraught. He wrapped a comforting wing around Valderra.
Rank: Hero
Country: Alageasia
Personality: Valderra loves to sing and dance, and practices both whenever she's not doing Dragon Rider duties. She enjoys entertaining people, and sketching. Valderra has always been one to smile, and is contagious for it. She likes to fly with Gabriel. She's a very easy person to get along with, and has hardly any enemies, that is of course, with the exception of Galbatorix. Working for the Varden makes her very happy, and she lets it be known. She enjoys sleeping in whenever possible, and even doesn't mind getting up early. She doesn't like those who lie and cheat, and has an uncanny ability to tell who those people are. She enjoys helping those who are in need, and doesn't ask to get anything back, other than a smile.
Code word: Zar'roc
And it also checked my grammer. I filled out my rank, and I took bold off of everything BUT the titles. 
I didn't see my mistake at first.