Sketches {{Critiques please}}

[Nostariel Lyvianthe]

Here's a few sketches I did. I've been trying lineart. Yet I'm really bad at it...So, This is probably as far as these are going to get in the world XP Critiques please, I know I"m bad X___X

[Elendrial (Eragon Shadeslayer)]

Lol, its not bad. I cant do lineart! I can do other kinds though..heh nice job.